Talk:Carpenter jeans
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Carpenter pants
[edit]Carpenter pants 2A02:587:2111:6637:D94D:EA5D:CD52:3A16 (talk) 18:44, 27 March 2023 (UTC)
What is Needed to Complete this Article?
[edit]There are three main things I believe are needed to complete this article: a history section for scholars, exact functionalities, and the users of the carpenter jeans.
It is important to have the history section for pretty much anything in Wikipedia. For scholars especially, if anyone wanted to research carpenter jeans, they would need to go somewhere else besides Wikipedia to find the history of carpenter jeans. If an article is going to be informational, it's important to know where this information comes from.
The second thing that is needed to complete this article is the exact functionalities of the jeans. Under the characteristic section of the article there is mention of how the jeans are made for functionality instead of fashion. I feel like if anyone wants to learn carpenter jeans and depth they need to get details on the functionality.
For an article to be as informational as possible, like a wiki article is meant to be, it needs to have a complete understanding of its audience. In order to do this I feel like there needs to be a section that is not only appealing to the audience but explaining that the author has an understanding of the audience.
Overall, this article is looking good so far, it just needs to be more complete. Wikistudent55 (talk) 00:22, 21 September 2023 (UTC)